Friday 14 May 2021

WALHT add detail

4 comments:

  1. Hi there, it is your buddy school from Auckland, Wesley Primary! WE LOVE LOVE LOVE your mud kitchen and were blown away with your language features.
    We made a connection to this because some of us love using the sandpit and we want to get a clay hill added to our school so we have to do a project on this too.
    Who gets to use your mud kitchen and how long did it take to make it?
    Keep up the wonderful posting!

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  2. Hi my name is Zoe. I really like the picture of what you made reading what you wrote was funny. I really liked how you added details to your writing. How long did it take you to make?

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  3. HI my name is Sofia. I really like what you made I liked how you added details into your writing I wonder if you can play in it.

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  4. this is very cool

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